Hello Morgan Cleary ,

Review of "Pink L.L. Bean Jacket" 

General Comments:

The title is apt and intriguing. It fits well with the content of the poem. The poem flows well with the story to tell, sometimes we take people for granted and only separation brings out the real truth to us. Here in this poem, you explain how your sister and you grew up together and how she was always there and though you always didn't want her being there always, she wanted it. Now after you hear someone speak about his loss you want to be with your sister. Love the way you brought the story, a lesson for many of us to learn. Truly written from the heart, this poem. Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda