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A beautiful poem about wanting to know if the person you love, loves you back. I like it how you compare the falling petals to the confusion between the yes or no. Your lines explain the frustration and the need to know. You have written a free form poem with a,a,b,b rhyme scheme which helps the poem flow better. Overall a good emotion filled poem. No mistakes in spelling, grammar or punctuation.

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A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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