Hello asheshizalari,

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General Comments:
A poem expressing the emotions of a day. The poem talks about the emotions and the various reasons for the emotions.

Form:
There is no particular form followed in the poem. It is a free form poem.

Title:
The title "I cried" is a good one,but a better title would be the last line of the poem "I lived". This is just my friendly suggestion

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes can be found.

My Favourite Lines:
"Today,
I lived."
These lines are important because many of us just go through life, without actually living it, so that line made me think.

Overall:
A very good poem, well written, so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda