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A poem about me and my sister.
by Morgan Cleary Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Yeah, siblings may fight, and be different, but when you grow up together and suddenly life changes, you are bound to look back on the past fondly with with a tinge of sadness. It is, after-all, your sister. Someone you were close too, even when you were arguing, that is what siblings do. But then reality hits and you are apart, and it is then that the depth of your fondness fr each other will be understood. However, after a time, you'll get used to it, and when you do see each other, it'll be a lot stronger and better. You'll be meeting as adults with all kinds of stories to tell each other, and maybe a few to confide with each other too. That is the advantage of adult sibling relationships.

As for the poem,I can't help but admire the style and tone of the poem. There are a lot of reminiscences here, some of them quaint, others mildly humorous, and the reader can smile because he knows not of the disagreements between you are of any real significance. We can see that the relationship is cased on love, even if you too could not. But that is what this poem is about, discovering that you care for your sister and will miss her. And I am sure she will too.

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