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Oh, the poor younger sister! You do know most of the readers will side with her? *Bigsmile*

It is a cute story, but a little sad in a way. I feel bad for the younger sister, she sounds innocent and sweet, and her older sister seems curt with her for no good reason. Of course I understand the older sister's point. She wants her sister to go to bed, so it is quiet and she has time for her homework, but still, it's just a little girl, her baby sister, that is a special thing! I know, it is easy for me to say. In her place I'd probably be a lot meaner to my little brother, but that is fair because that would have been long ago, and he turned out to be a miserable human being, lol.

The writing is good, the story is both clear and well drawn. The characters each have different personalities, which means you were thinking and trying to give each her own personality.

When you mentioned the basement, t expecting something bad to happen, so I read with one hand ready to cover my eyes, lol. Fortunately nothing like that ever happened, instead it was just an amusing tale of two sisters and how they interact. .I guess I've just watched too many horror movies in my life, lol.

It's a cute, nicely written, entertaining story, and what more can one ask?

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