Noticing Newbies Newsletter 11-14-2012,
Featured newbies and yours is among them.
I use the newsletter for reviewing fodder.

What a love story of lasting proportions.
Through thick, thin, thinner, and thinnest sticking together.
Ironically this writer celebrates his 25th wedding anniversary on Christmas day this year.
Your love seems to have lasted much longer than that. Encouraging to carry on through our lives.

Form and structure are top drawer.
Flow is even and distinctive.
Pace is unhurried as the reader is caught up in the tale.
Minor grammatical snafus along the way in no way disrupts the flow.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew