Noticing Newbies Newsletter 11-14-2012,
Featured newbies and yours is among them.
I use the newsletter for reviewing fodder.

Quite coherent considering it was a 15 minute write.
The things you speak of bear imagery the reader identifies with.
While the form is somewhat stretched,
the gist of your randomization is in tact.
Grammatically snafu free, i would make no suggestions for improvement.
This is your creation, your opinions spilling onto the canvas.
You have the right to change or alter that which you write.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew