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 Sand Castles Open in new Window. [E]
It is a series of 5-7-5 poem (haiku)...
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Noticing Newbies Newsletter 11-14-2012,
Featured newbies and yours is among them.
I use the newsletter for reviewing fodder.

A very clear picture you do paint.
The object is sand castles.
Their plight is the tragedy.
Eulogizing them in the end is your gift.

Form and structure is well suited to the Haiku.
Flow is smooth and defined.
Pace is rapid as the tide coming in.
Grammatically snafu free you are suggestion for improvement free.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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