Noticing Newbies Newsletter 11-14-2012,
Featured newbies and yours is among them.
I use the newsletter for reviewing fodder.

Oh my goodness, what an award winning tale you tell.
I too suffer from arachnophobia.
Brave of you to write of such an event.
You know personally the fear that these beasts cause.

Imagery alone gripped this readers mind.
Wanting you to win over these mutant spiders.
Carnivorous too! Wow what a scary thought.

Form and structure are a firm foundation.
The plot is suspense filled from the beginning.
Flow is a roller coaster of terror.
Pace is rapid, let's get the heck out of here!
Grammatically snafu free no suggestions for improvement are needed today.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, Mdiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew