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 Her Secret Open in new Window. [E]
Poem about hiding yourself from those who are supposed to be closest to you.
by Joanna Emily Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My Thoughts: Very interesting poem and one I enjoyed very much! And the title fits your poem nicely.

Favorite Part: Even though I enjoyed your poem from beginning to end here is what stuck out at me: She faked a smile everyday. Deep down inside she knew, She wasn’t okay. and one more line: She fools all, including herself. These are the three lines that stood out to me!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep on writing and sharing!

My Rating: 4.5 *Starbr*'s

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