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Hi Grandpa D,
I'm glad I came across your poem. Here are my responses to your poem.

Title: The title is appropriate for the poem, letting the readers know exactly what the poem is all about.

Tone: The tone seems to be one of anger - anger at being understood wrongly - misunderstood.

Content: The content seems to provide a contrast between Christ's offering of Himself (His body and blood) to his loved ones and His possibly offering Himself up to those who don't understand, or appreciate, who He is.

Musicality: This poem reads well. There is a distinct rhythm that works well with this poem.

I hope my feedback is helpful. If you need to touch base with me for further details, please don't hesitate to contact me.

Wishing you the best with your writing,
JM



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