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I don't give a rating of 5.0 very easily, but this poem got a 5.0 rate from me. You employed a very powerful word choice. I like your rhyme scheme, and the shorter fourth line of each chapter (that reminds me of many of Dorothy Parker's poems). It drove the message home - over and over again. This poem is well written. I couldn't find ANYTHING that I thought needs changing. Well done!


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