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 | An Exotic Pet  [E] A story about a different kind of exotic pet. A Writer's Cramp entry.  |
| (5.0)| Hello allenalien Thanks for allowing me to use your story in the Comedy Newsletter: "What's the Secret to Writing Comedy?" ! Since your story made me laugh, I wanted to stop by and give it a review!   I enjoyed reading this quirky story! It had me laughing at the opening line and it kept going from there!  What I liked about this story is that it leads you down a path perfectly. Then, when you read the ending it takes you totally by surprise! Very smart! I enjoyed all your descriptions of Ugly--from the way he smelled, to what happened to him with the food he ate--funny stuff! The structure stood out to me too--it flowed in a smooth way from one thought to the next, and I thought it was a brilliant piece of comedic writing! Great ending! Thanks for entertaining me--the humor was spot on! Keep up the great work!Happy writing! Lornda
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