Hi Of Fire Born mourns Mama ,

I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "Invalid Item" .

Title
A great title that definitely fits your poem well!

Flow/Rhythm
Flow is good; line-to-line transition and breaks are done well. Your poem has a very nice rhythm to it.

Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation
Your word choice is excellent! It creates such vivid imagery for the reader. I see no spelling or punctuation errors. Well done!

Helpful Tips for Improvement
This poem is awesome! It needs no improvement.

Overall Impression
I absolutely love acrostic poetry. I love reading them, writing them and reviewing them. This form can be very difficult when it comes to finding the right words to use. You've done it well. The addition of the picture was a nice touch. My favorite part is the following:

"Succored well by winds and rain,
Opened gates of hell;
Nature's wrath unleashed, untamed... learn her lessons well."

This was a thoroughly enjoyable read that was very well penned. Well done. Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!!

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