A cute little poem describing a wasp. But as the poem unfolds, we see that it's about more than just one wasp. It speculates about a grandiose wasp future, where the wasp becomes the prince of the hive, and with his queen, makes his own offspring, thereby restarting the cycle.

My favorite part was:
Some of them might choose to say hi,
And others will just say good-bye.

I think it was a great way to end the poem. I can picture the hive swarming away in all directions.

Putting actual science aside, this is a very enjoyable and fantastic story, in poetic format. An interesting subject, mixed with a healthy dose of poetic license, makes this a very enjoyable must read.

Nice job on this!


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