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 When I First Met You. Open in new Window. [E]
This is just something I wrote for my boyfriend yesterday.
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Single space this and replace & with the word And. You have a very nice poem. I like the way you say your love will last til your hears loses (not looses) beats, your eyes shut, your hearing stops and your body drops. I hope that your love does last that long and through eternity because love never dies.
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