\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
Printed from https://webx1.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/3351259
Review #3351259
Viewing a review of:
 Different Power Open in new Window. [E]
A story that has the lesson explained within itself.
by Bob Author Icon
Review of Different Power  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE NEWBIE REVIEWE...  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **

You have an interesting message. I agree that opposites can make good partners if they learn to use each other's strengths to compensate for the weakness's. You did not edit your piece, however. I found many errors.

1. In stanza two the word is spelled sophisticated.
2. In stanza five it should be succeed not success.
3. Stanzas six and seven, what do you mean match and truce?
4. Stanza nine, they combined in first line, not the; hide, not hid, each other and each other's, they are two words. "to accomplish in life," accomplish needs a noun, accomplish what?
5. Stanza ten, see comment above on each other's.
   *NoteR* You have not yet responded to this review. Ignore
Printed from https://webx1.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/3351259