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Given: Jul 19, 2010 at 4:32pm
Length: 642 Characters |
636 w/o WritingML
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You have an interesting message. I agree that opposites can make good partners if they learn to use each other's strengths to compensate for the weakness's. You did not edit your piece, however. I found many errors.
1. In stanza two the word is spelled sophisticated.
2. In stanza five it should be succeed not success.
3. Stanzas six and seven, what do you mean match and truce?
4. Stanza nine, they combined in first line, not the; hide, not hid, each other and each other's, they are two words. "to accomplish in life," accomplish needs a noun, accomplish what?
5. Stanza ten, see comment above on each other's.
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