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SOARING PACKAGE REVIEW



DISCLAIMER: This comes to you as a reader would see your work. I have only my opinion to offer.


TITLE: Fits the content well.

IMAGERY: Good and vivid. A write happens on a wolf laying quietly on the ground. Although the thought of the wolf brings fear to people; this writer can see a softer side. Peacefully laying there; not at all the image writers portray but stimulate the writer and fill him full of ispiration. He writes with such confidence. He knows how beautiful this creature is and might have even been able to look into its eyes. As with man; who has two sides as well. The soft side and the side that can destroy. The difference is the wolf is by instinct and man because he can.


TONE: Good depth of feelings. An unusual piece. A good image given by the writer. The reader can almost see the majestic creature in the mind. Good part;

So, bright writers, look for exciting powers
Believe in yourselves, and wolfish hope towers.




FLOW: Flow is good. The word choice is good

OVERALL: Good read. Please keep sharing.

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