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SOARING PACKAGE REVIEW


DISCLAIMER: This comes to you as a reader would see your work. I have only my opinion to offer.


TITLE: Fits the content well.

IMAGERY: Good and vivid. A man having a bad time of it emotionally finds it hard to write happy things. When he writes his dark emotions come out. Over riding his desire to spread love and spirit; he is caught in the gloomy pit right now. He knows it will take some time to get in a better frame of mind. Then the inspiration will return and he will create happier pieces. Good part;

Now, my bright dreams and life goals, I confuse
As, today, I find myself saying. "What's the use?"

TONE: Good depth of feelings. The emotional upset is guiding him now. Soon, hopefully it will let up. Soon he will be himself again. Finding a lighter side of life again.




FLOW: Flow is good. The word choice is good

OVERALL: Good read. Please keep sharing.

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