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SOARING PACKAGE REVIEW




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TITLE: Fits the content well.

IMAGERY: Good and vivid. Losing a lover after you build your hopes and dreams on them is hard to take. Feeling this might be the one to find out it was just an illusion. Loving and wanting forever but nothing really existed. Empty promises and empty words breaks the heart like a hammer. Good part;

You've loved him for only a swift moment,
and in that wink, all you cares on him went

TONE: Good depth of feelings. Loss is felt. Loneliness is felt as well. Longing for forever and getting never. Just a momentary retreat to the lonely life that must be lived. Good part;

How cruel to find all of your desires
Just outside your reach as you time expires




FLOW: Flow is good. The word choice is good

OVERALL: Good read. Please keep sharing.

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