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Review of REMAINS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is a sad poem, with the emotion expressed through the description of the desert. The description is visual and the reader can see the desert with its cactus in her mind. I found no technical problems or typos.

This is my favorite line, ruptured songs across prickly air, because it emphasizes the emotion of the poem.

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