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The rhythm is smooth and repeating of end words suggest rhyme. The poem expresses the essence of the accompanying photo.

These are my favorite lines because they suggest that scent is the way a plant gives thanks.
The lavender blossoms;
Giving thanks with
Her beautiful scent.


In this line, Of all who admire her beauty, I suggest changing her to their since an earlier line in this stanza refers to more then one rose.

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