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 Planetball! Open in new Window. [E]
Opinion piece on Earth, roles of science & God, responsibility. Written on Earth Day.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I like the title Planetball. The speaker in the poem address Earth rather than an invisible audience. The point of view is a good choice for this poem. The rhyme is rough, but not distracting to the reader. The rhymes are well chosen and fit the poem. I found no technical problem or typos.

This is my favorite line, Between the labcoats and pews, because it expresses the essence of the argument between science and religion.

This is an intriguing and thought provoking poem which made me smile. Write On!

Everyday is Earth Day!
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