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This is a thought provoking essay, written in the form of a prose poem. The main point of this essay is the need for the individual to change his or her thinking from I to we. The reason for this change is well expressed in the essay.

This is my favorite line, Thinking needs to change from `I' to `We'. And the `We' needs to include every co-habitant upon the planet, because it includes every living creature on Earth.

In this phrase, insatiable predator---man kind, I suggest making man kind a single word.

This is a well thought out and written essay. Write On!
Everyday is Earth Day!
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