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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello there, fellow writer!!
I am here to give my review about your work of art...
"The Final Vow"
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Sorry for being late!! *Blush*


*Idea*Three Important Things Before We Start*Idea*
*Quill* Take only the suggestions you think you need most.
*Quill* These are only my opinions and others may not say the same things.
*Quill* Smile. Then, keep writing and inspiring!!



!True Love's Kiss! (Strengths)

The day has just started and I'm already crying my eyes out. *Laugh* This was truly a heart-wrenching piece. I 'saw' each moment you described and 'felt' each emotion packaed within each word...

Flawless Imagery!! *Thumbsup*
Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling-- Got nothing to complain about here!! *Wink*

!Wicked Witch! (Weak Points)

I found nothing that destroys the beauty of this piece. *Smile*

!Fairy Godmother! (Suggestions)

It's perfect the way it is and I would not want to change this any other way. *Bigsmile*

!Happily Ever After! (Additional 'Blabber')

Wow!! I've been stressed lately... because of family problems... but I find it hard to cry. Reading this, then crying after doing so... I must say that helped a lot. I read somewhere that crying helps relieve even a bit of stress. *Laugh*

Just a few weeks ago, a famous Japanese celebrity died... she was suffering for year's with the same disease as Katie, here. And I was really touched when they showed some of the last videos of her life before her death... How her husband was caring so much for her even though she can't remember him that much anymore... It reminded me that maybe, somewhere out there, 'true' love still exists. *Smile*

My favorite part... & the part where I couldn't help but cry:

The part where they were on the swing and he was begging, silently for her to remember... *Cry* Two simple words (Please, remember.) packed with indescribable feelings of love and pain. I can't imagine anyone not crying after reading this story. *Heart*

Thank you very much for sharing this beautiful, touching piece to us all. *Delight*

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*Star*!Keep On Writing And Inspiring!*Star*
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