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| Hello Princess Megan Rose   . After reading "Invalid Item"  , I would like to offer you a review on behalf of the "Merit Badge Bonanza!" . Please accept what is helpful and disregard anything that is not. Review of
A brief, but quite detailed run down of Sammy Brady, a character on the Soap Opera, Days of Our Lives. MY FAVORITE PART She has found love with Rafe but will it last? Soap Operas. Don't you just love them? SUGGESTIONS  She has a twin brother Eric. He is no longer on the show.  There needs to be a comma after "brother". Also, both of these sentences are extremely short and could very easily be combined into two to make the reading less choppy. Sammy has a half sister Carrie.  There needs to be a comma after "sister". Sammy wanted Carrie's boyfriend Austin.  As with the above two suggestions, a comma should be inserted after "boyfriend".OVERALL IMPRESSION Well, I have to admit that I have not watched any soaps since my younger days, and then I was more into The Young and the Restless. I did, however, watch a bit of Days of Our Lives, but don't recall much about it anymore. I was not at all familiar with Sammy Brady, the star of this write. After reading, I feel like I know her very well! I believe this could be a very delightful read if you would take just a couple of minutes to go through and combine quite a few of the shorter sentences. As it is, it is a bit choppy and doesn't flow too smoothly for the reader. But, the details are very good! Thank you for introducing this very beautiful lady to me! Warmest Best,  Kristi 
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