Hello just stopping in for a many group review of Scarred chapter 1.

Overall Impression: I thought this was a very good chapter. The young girl was an excellent touch. What happens to her parents is so sad.

Characters: You described them wonderfully. I cold picture them in my mind and everything.

Setting: Again you painted a beautiful picture with your words.

Plot: Unsure as of right now, but I am positive I will be able to figure it out. Maybe it is jst a little too early for me. LOL
I saw a few errors, but I am sre yo will catch them dring editing. The one I wanted to point out though was:Right after we get back how you like to go along to Plymouth. Is this supposed to say Right after we get back how would you?

THANK YOU FOR THE PRIVILAGE OF READING YOUR EXCELLENT WORK.

REMEMBER KEEP WRITING AND HAVE FUN!!!!!!!
MYSTIC SIERRA

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