Chapter #5Shrink on Command by: Ëtalfni   "Became smaller," Nick said with a slight glint in his eye as he continued swinging the watch back and forth.
"Smaller...," Judy repeated sleepily. "How...Small?"
"Ohhh, let's say an inch, for starters. Become an inch shorter for me."
Of course, Nick didn't really expect this to work. Hypnotism into speaking whatever was on Judy's mind was one thing, but Nick didn't truly believe that he could command her to change her body in any way. Let alone shrinking. It was just the first thing that had come to mind, for some reason.
But as he looked down at her, he noticed an odd look of focus on Judy's face compared to her blissful contentment he had grown used to with the hypnotism. Then Judy clenched her body up like she was trying to press herself inwards. Her arms trembled a little bit before Nick noticed something else. Her height had dipped slightly. It was subtle, but Nick did notice it in how her uniform suddenly seemed slightly looser and how she came up lower on his chest.
"Carrots...What did you just do?"
"I made myself...An inch shorter."
It was a sort of blink and you'd miss it moment and hard to confirm. For Judy's height, an inch was a decent chunk of her size but it wasn't completely noticeable. After all, people grew and shrunk over the course of a day with their spine stretching out. There was only one way to confirm his eyes weren't playing tricks on him.
"...Can you do it again?" he asked.
Judy made the same look of concentration as her whole body trembled, like she was using all her strength to force herself to be smaller. And though such an attempt should have had no effect on her person, somehow it was working. Nick could watch as she descended ever so closer to the floor and further down his chest for comparison. Her uniform was starting to slip down, exposing more of her her and shoulders. And even her belt was beginning to fall off of her waist as she made no effort to grab hold of it. She just stared back at the watch with a look of acceptance and bliss.
"I made myself...Two inches shorter."
"How?" was all Nick could get out.
"I'm...Not sure...Listening to your commands...My body acted on its own...I can't ignore it...Even if I tried."
"But doesn't it feel weird?"
"It feels like...Being squeezed into a tighter and tighter box...It's not unpleasant...I just feel...Compressed now...I'm still all of me...But now I just take up...Less space."
That was certainly one way of putting it. Losing two inches, Judy had almost lost a tenth of her size. Maybe she still weighted the same? Mass didn't just disappear in an instant like that, after all. Though then again people didn't just magically shrink on command either. Nick shook his head before he locked himself in a mental tangent.
"Can you grow back to your normal size?"
"I think...So."
"Then do it. Return to your normal height."
Judy's face turned to one of relief as she let out what appeared to be a deep breath, even though Nick wasn't even aware she had been holding her breath in. Though as she did, he watched as her height steadily increased at a similar rate of the shrinking process and her body filled out the loose uniform she was wearing. It was strange. Like he had commanded Judy's body to store up her lost height and now she was being allowed to release it like a loaded spring coil. Even his ears detected a slight twang of muscle and bone as they stretched into place and Judy settled back into her original size.
Nick was left speechless by the whole thing until Judy spoke again.
"Was that...What you would find attractive?"
Right. This whole discovery happened because Nick had said he would tell Judy what he would find attractive for her to do. But why had he asked her to shrink as the initial thing? He could tell himself that it was plan old curiosity, but that would be lying. He was plainly aware that Judy had always been shorter in their relationship, though height had always seemed the least of their differences. Yet, for Nick, he couldn't deny there was something stirring about the thought within him. The bunny he had a crush on completely at the whims of his desire, getting smaller and smaller while he proved to be the dominate one towering over her. Nick was never strong or big, especially among preds or even other foxes. To have a little toy he could play with...The only question was in what way should he play with Judy?
Nick grinned as he finally answered Judy. "You know, it was pretty darn close. But we can do better than that, I think. There's so much potential here for some fun together. So, here's what we're going to do, Carrots..."
Nick then commanded her to...   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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