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The orb is left for a teen girl to find. It gives her powers to read and modify the minds.

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Chapter #5

Rick (thinking he is Ellen) tries to explain

    by: Jill Bauer Author IconMail Icon
Maggie could not believe that Rick walked over to her in her mom's negligee. He approached Maggue and put his hand on her shoulder. "Look Maggie what I have done is not good." Rick then put Ellen's robe over his negligee and cinched it tight. He then sat on the bed and crossed his legs.

"Honey I think we need to have a mother daughter chat about all of this." At this pont Maggie became very upset. "Rick what is going on you are not my mom." for some reason you found this very funny and added a new dimension to this situation. You put in Maggie's head that even though she knew Rick was not your mom she would only respond to Rick as if he were her mother.

When Rick heard Maggie proclaim that he was not your mom he grinned. "Sweetie, if I am not your mom than who am I ?"
Maggie wanted to say you are my boyfriend dressed like my mom, but instead she said, "Mom this is not right Rick is my boyfriend."

Rick began to feel the emotional attachment to his new daughter. He responded by saying," Look let me get dressed and we will go in the kitchen and talk about all this okay?"

Maggie shook her head and left the bedroom. Ellen was dressed in Rick's clothes and decided that it was time to leave. she looked at Maggie and said, "Okay I guess that is my cue to split and let you two hash all this out. Maggie wanted to persuade Ellen to say but since you altered her mind she could not comprehend who Ellen was. Ellen was a non-entity in Maggie's mind. She knew Rick was her boyfriend, but also thought of him now as her mother. Where do we go from here?

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