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Chapter #8

Renee's brother reveals himself and works t...

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Renee's eyes drifted closed, the soothing sound of the refrigerator and clock threatening to lull her to sleep right there on the floor. Small moans of pleasure escaped her lips as her hand worked almost automatically, making circles on the tight skin of her overstuffed belly.

Her eyes darted open as she heard the creak of a floorboard, and she glanced hastily at the stairs. A shadow slowly crept downward, silent and stealthy, though betrayed by the old wooden boards. It was on the stairs now, and before Renee could flee, the shadow stepped forward, and she saw who it was. Her brother. His expression was one of fascination and his eyes seemed glued to her exposed belly.

Renee's eyes darted up the stairs, hoping no one else was coming down, though it seemed as if Ray was alone. He was smaller than her now, though older than her by almost 4 years. She was sure she must have looked like a beached whale next to him, blubbery and enormous, where he seemed trim and agile. With one last look at the stairs, Renee quickly shifted over so that her stomach would be hidden behind the boxes of junk food that littered the room.

"What are you doing?" Ray asked softly as he walked towards her. "You know you're not allowed to eat all that junk food."

She opened her mouth, ready with a lie so she could continue eating without interruption, but Ray shook his head gently and walked purposefully towards her. Ray noticed her belly first and smiled, then hurried over and knelt beside her, his hands hovering over her abdomen as it heaved with each intake of air.

"Looks like you're feeling pretty full." Ray whispered with a grin.

Renee tried to bat him away, but her gut was heavy, and she flailed weakly. He gave her a reproachful look and gently lifted her chin with a finger. "I'll tell you what, I won't tell mom or dad about this. I'll even help you hide the evidence and get back to your room. Though, in return, let me feed you even more. You can't stop until I say you're done, then I'll help you to your room, and mom and dad will be none the wiser."

Renee bit her lip, her stomach feeling like it was ready to burst. Her brother smiled down at her, his hand mere inches from her swollen belly, his fingers flexing in anticipation. She licked her lips, her brain screaming for her to ignore what he said, but her gut was screaming louder, urging her on. She felt the bile rise in her mouth, but turning to her brother, she could see the hunger in his eyes and knew it would be impossible to turn down his offer.

"Alright," Renee whispered, her stomach turning in anticipation of more food despite how stuffed it already felt.

Ray smiled wickedly, "Alright, cow, what should I feed you first?"

Renee watched as her brother stood and moved towards the cupboard, surveying the remaining snacks that had initially escaped her hunger. His eyes were wide and his pupils dilated with an excitement Renee had never seen before, and she felt a thrill at the prospect of seeing her big brother in this state. He seemed to drink the sight of her in, his eyes never wavering, and she felt a shiver of delight shoot through her body.

"Here," he said quietly, almost to himself, and grabbed another package of cookies, "Be a good cow and eat these. We're going to make you nice and fat. I want your belly to be so big that you look pregnant."

Renee gave a shudder of delight as her brother walked back over gingerly, and she waited for him to say something. The sight before her was both sickening and fascinating. Her brother ripped open the package and withdrew a single cookie, placing it gently in her mouth. She chewed as slowly as possible, savoring it, but Ray only chuckled, "Faster. You need to eat every bit, swallow it all now, and get ready for the next one."

Ray didn't give her a chance to respond, stuffing another cookie into her slightly opened mouth. She swallowed as fast as she could as it slid down her throat, and he soon gave her a third cookie. He then started in on the rest of the treats on the counter, stuffing a scoop of chocolate chips into her mouth, and then grabbing a package of M&M's and pouring almost the entire pack into her mouth.

Renee's belly felt like it was about to burst, but she obediently ate everything that was offered to her. With each passing moment, she felt herself becoming heavier, and she knew it was only a matter of time before they were discovered if this went on too long. Still, Ray wouldn't let her stop, even as her belly ballooned outward, resting more and more on the ground as its weight pulled it down. Her belly got bigger and bigger, her shirt stretching as it grew, soon not even fitting around her midsection as it rode higher and higher on her torso.

Her brother seemed intent on making sure she kept eating, though. He sat down next to her, leaning back as he watched her eat. "Going to have yourself quite the little meal," her brother said, glancing down at her belly that was spreading outward while the surrounding shirt tightened, "Soon you're going to be my nice, obese cow. Don't worry, I'll keep you well fed."

Renee felt her gut churning, but she couldn't stop eating. She could see her brother's childlike excitement and didn't want to risk his ire. Renee kept shoveling treats into her mouth, barely chewing them before she swallowed them and waited for more. She could feel the wreath of her shirt growing tight around her middle, pressing hard into her flesh, but her brother refused to let her stop. Ray locked his dark eyes onto her stomach and the chocolate chip cookies he fed her. She ate and ate, letting the fattening treats slide down her throat while her brother fed them to her. It was as if he were in a trance, seemingly barely aware of anything around them except what was happening to his younger sister.

Renee watched her belly slowly expanding outward with each treat she ate, her skin stretching tighter with every bite. Despite being undone, her pants were feeling painfully tight again around her widening middle. With every morsel she consumed, Renee knew her appetite would be irreversibly increased. Every mouthful of cookies or cakes would make it harder for her to resist food in the future. Her already impressive appetite would swell with every treat she devoured, and Renee feared for what would happen to her. She had no wish to be the fattest girl in school, but maybe it was inevitable. She nibbled on the last few pieces of her food, her hands resting weakly on her bloated belly.

"Oh, I don't think you're done yet," her brother said, holding out a hand as he licked his lips and grinned.

Renee looked at her brother, and her mouth watered at the sight of the brownie in his hands. Her belly felt like it could burst at any moment, and yet her mouth was watering over the rich treat. She wanted it. Her mouth watered as she imagined the sweet chocolate melting in her mouth, and she reached out her hands to take it. Renee's head spun and her legs felt wobbly at the thought of eating even more, but it was so tempting.

Her brother was silent as she ate, watching her with a glittering look in his eyes. Her belly had ballooned now, the swell of it almost completely escaping the confines of her overstretched shirt. Only when her belly was rotund and distended far beyond its normal bounds did Ray's hand go to her stomach, and she felt the movement against her as he rubbed around her bloated belly, massaging her tight flesh with a surprisingly delicate touch.

She was panting heavily now, her head spinning and her heart pounding in her chest. Renee's head was spinning from eating so much, her mouth and hands felt heavy and lethargic, and yet she couldn't stop eating. Food was everywhere, it seemed, as Ray offered her another brownie. She ate it with a clumsy, wide-open mouth and then almost pouted as he fed her another. Her belly was still painfully stretched, and yet she ate it with a ravenous hunger.

"Just a few more," her brother said as she chewed, "Then you can go to bed, cow."

Her stomach gurgled loudly, and she groaned as her brother laughed, "Oh, I'm not done with you yet, little cow. You're nice and plump, but still not big enough. I'll make sure you're fatter than anything in the world before too long."

Renee's mind felt clouded, but she could still understand the words her brother was speaking.
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