Lyrically Speaking

Thanks for your comment, I wish I could be so creative to write my own melody..maybe someday when I dont feel so...I dont know the word, thats funny in itself, maybe inferior or scared or stupid..lol. I'll stick to words for now. Thanks for the name. I may use it later. Right now I just want to get some feedback and see how silly it really sounds. Its to simple, it needs more, but that will come in time. Sometimes things just flow out, other times I feel stuck...maybe cause I want it more then anything, so wanting is blocking creativity..probably sounds stupid, but true, to much pressure on myself.
I would like to see more people here myself. Im new here. But I will come back often :)
Thanks :)

Sincerely, Desert Rain