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Rated: 18+ · Message Forum · Opinion · #595449

Write songs much?Feel free to discuss it here(plus R&R as always).

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Oct 6, 2003 at 5:02pm
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I have but a chorus
I wrote this chorus a while ago when it kept running through my head so here I am putting it in black and white, I dont know where to go with it as I havent written lyrics down before although I'm forever singing new words out loud and never gotten to do anything with them. Thought I'd see if others think I should quit while I'm ahead

Chorus

Dont you understand
that when you touch my hand
your driving me crazy baby
Dont you understand that
wherever you are in this land
I'm thinking of you baby
And that when I touch your hand
im telling you I love you baby

Chorus end
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I have but a chorus · 10-06-03 5:02pm
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Re: I have but a chorus · 10-06-03 10:29pm
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Re: I have but a chorus · 10-06-03 10:52pm
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