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Hello Lynn Nichole ,

Wow, that title! I am not a gamer, but l live with gamers. And I am a Cyberpunk person, so "Real Zero" hits on so many levels for me. Great job coming up with a title that immediately grabs my attention.

The plot of your story is very intriguing. Have you considered what the age ranges of the characters are? Parts of your description sounds like it's geared toward Young Adult readers or Urban Fantasy type readers. That was a little bit of the vibe I got, but it might be entirely my own hang ups that brought me to that conclusion. Full disclosure, I am a YA and Urban Fantasy reader.

If this project comes to a point when you want to show it, let me know. I think this can be a great and entertaining read for me.

Annette