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Nov 2, 2025 at 2:26pm
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Re: Jake's Form of the week: Shanzi
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
*Dollar* 500 GPs were sent to JCosmos Author Icon with this post.
Excellent question!

Shanzi has seven lines, but you have eight. Syllable counts are also off.

Let the creativity flow from your soul! *Cool*
Dave
"The Poet's Place " 
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