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Be clear who is doing what. My High-school English teacher told me that after I submitted a fairly confusing modernization of Beowulf. I don't remember what but I made too many "he said" dialogue tags in the same paragraph with two speakers. My teacher wrote "who's talking?" in red ink above the last line of that section. From then on I tried harder to differentiate between characters. |