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Jul 15, 2025 at 11:35pm
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Re: DISCUSSION: Why do you write?
Thanks for this, Dave.

My consistent motivation is to express my heart, so that others may be helped when they are experiencing the same things that I am experiencing at some given moment. Today's poem is the processing of grief over the passing of my mother-in-law. ""Mama is Gone." The first poem I ever wrote at the age of 13 was the grief over love, that never happened.
 
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My Heart - My First Poem Ever  (E)
This is the foundation of my career as a poet. Heartbreak emotion needed this release.
#2159356 by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon


In school, I was the student who always groaned when the teacher gave a writing assignment, that would cause me deep thought, and require me to put pencil to paper for those arduous five to ten pages of necessary excellence.

However, as an adult, I have come to cherish writing as a dear friend, whom I wish I knew better, describing features in more eloquent, honoring words. My poetry has improved over the years, and The Poet's Place Café has been a place of learning for me. I wish I had the mental tools for writing better prose. I took one course in writing about 30 years ago. I would love to find some courses or mentorship to improve my novel writing, that could transform my books from stories I tell to riveting page-turners, that people beg me to write more of.

Any advice or direction would be greatly appreciated.

Blessings Always.

Jay

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DISCUSSION: Why do you write? · 07-14-25 2:31pm
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Re: DISCUSSION: Why do you write? · 07-14-25 2:45pm
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Re: Re: DISCUSSION: Why do you write? · 07-15-25 10:44am
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Re: Re: Dan's DISCUSSION: Why do you write? · 07-15-25 2:18pm
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Re: WakeUpAndLive's DISCUSSION: Why do you write? · 07-15-25 1:40pm
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Re: Jay O'Toole's DISCUSSION: Why do you write? · 07-16-25 1:19pm
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Re: Re: DISCUSSION: Why do you write? · 07-16-25 2:43pm
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