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Jul 7, 2025 at 11:42pm

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Edited: July 7, 2025 at 11:45pm

Re: DISCUSSION: The Theory of Relativity

by Jay O'Toole

Hey, Dave. Here's my offering. I hope you enjoy it.

Title: Progress Is Failing Forward

A
hopeful
thought of what
my poems can be
may spark conviction
for writing, doodling more
every day, and each hour.
Must it rhyme? Sometimes it does that.
It has rhythm like drumming fingers.
To free verse, I'm not averse, just not great.

Here is yet another signature, that has been provided for me by my good friends, WS & GG.

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DISCUSSION: The Theory of Relativity · 07-07-25 3:52pm
by Dave

Re: DISCUSSION: The Theory of Relativity · 07-07-25 11:42pm
by Jay O'Toole

Re: Jay O'Toole's DISCUSSION: The Theory of Relativity · 07-08-25 4:42pm
by Dave

Re: Re: Jay O'Toole's DISCUSSION: The Theory of Relativity · 07-08-25 6:47pm
by Jay O'Toole

Re: DISCUSSION: The Theory of Relativity · 07-08-25 6:59am
by Dan I Am

Re: Dan's DISCUSSION: The Theory of Relativity · 07-08-25 4:46pm
by Dave

Re: DISCUSSION: The Theory of Relativity · 07-08-25 8:28am
by Seabreeze

Re: Seabreeze's DISCUSSION: The Theory of Relativity · 07-08-25 4:51pm
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