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May 8, 2025 at 12:16am
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Re: DISCUSSION: Imitation
Imitation is supposed to be the sincerest form of flattery, yes?


Here is my attempt:

Texas Morning

Morning cries aloud
Grackles fill the trees
Boisterous noises proud
Together in a massive crowd
Taking skyward with greatest ease

Traffic flows endlessly
Brake lights flash; horn sound
Into the air fussing ceaselessly
Watching everyone endlessly
So an accident won't confound



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DISCUSSION: Imitation · 05-05-25 1:01pm
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Re: DISCUSSION: Imitation · 05-06-25 12:15am
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Re: Jay O'Toole's DISCUSSION: Imitation · 05-06-25 4:13pm
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