Noticing Newbies

Hey all !! This is Blade98x. I am wannabe writer and currently I am writing : The Midnight Stroll
"Midnight Stroll" follows Ross Berman, a bachelor whose late-night walks take a supernatural turn when he discovers a mysterious bronze key. Set in an Earth-like world, the story blends mystery and fantasy as Ross unravels the secrets behind the key’s power.
And I am a 20 year old average guy who wants to write his own story after reading light novels for last 4 years.
I have written 2 chapters as of now. Please read them and do tell me your experience.