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Dec 23, 2022 at 9:07pm
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Re: Form of the week: Sweetbriar


Essential


They smile and wave
but have no clue
who lives behind each face.
They share a street,
a neighborhood,
yet wall-off their own space.

This planet’s vast,
a residence
for all the human race.
Unseal your heart;
see through their eyes.
Love’s vital to our place.



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12 lines
Poet’s Place Café prompt: Sweetbriar form ( two six-line stanzas / syllables of 4-4-6-4-4-6 per line in each stanza / rhyme scheme of x-x-a-x-x-a per stanza, x being unrhymed )

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