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Sep 24, 2022 at 4:17pm
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Re: Re: Review request, please.
by Azul Author IconMail Icon
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Oh yay, thank you! I really appreciate your considered feedback and I will think deeply on it.

I guess that I was worried about bogging things down or being predictable (Overthinkers unite--once we've gone through every possible reason to!) hahaha.

A lot more about Skyllar, who she is and all that happens in the "first" chapter, that comes next.

I have so much to ponder now. Gracias!

Azul
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Review request, please. · 09-24-22 3:16pm
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Re: Review request, please. · 09-24-22 3:32pm
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Re: Re: Review request, please. · 09-24-22 3:53pm
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Re: Review request, please. · 09-24-22 4:07pm
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