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Sep 14, 2022 at 3:21pm
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by Lornda Author IconMail Icon
Here is my rewrite. *Bigsmile*

*Paintbl* Original version: (Written in 2012, and it's horrible. *Vomit* *Laugh*)

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Baby Swears  (13+)
A tough situation of a baby swearing results in one fast decision
#1864787 by Lornda Author IconMail Icon


*Paintg* New version:

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"Curse" the Language Barrier  (18+)
Whenever my son swore, it was his father’s fault.
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