I liked the way you began your review with a positive reaction. You certainly met the criteria as to the minimum 500 characters.
I believe you gave two or more suggestions for improvement. The other things to look for to comment on: did they use all the genre boxes? Did they describe what their piece was about? To attract readers it is best to always do those things, so they are good suggestions.
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