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Jul 18, 2022 at 12:13am
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Please Review: Tea for Two
It's for a contest entry. It's definitely not finished, yet. I'm wondering how I can improve on it. This is from an Irish woman's point of view, so is her dialogue realistic? What about the situation? The prompt is about tea with two friends, but it could be any beverage of your choice.

Please tell me what I can improve. Thanks!

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Please Review: Tea for Two · 07-18-22 12:13am
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Re: Please Review: Tea for Two · 08-14-22 12:18am
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