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Please Review: The Pharaoh of Ayubia

This is a short story I worked on, but I need improvement on how I can make this a much more stronger story

The Pharaoh of Ayubia (18+)

A humble captain leads the Pharoah of Ayubia on a perilous mission

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Please Review: The Pharaoh of Ayubia · 01-23-22 9:24am
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