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Hi Monty, Yes the world is changing and though some of it is amazing, the seeming loss of humanity is startling. Nice poem. (Note, for the Lai there should only be 2 rhymes aabaabaab, you created a poem with 4 rhymes aabccbddb. It's really not important, the Form inspired this thoughtful piece. The content is the more important than the frame.) ~~Tink |