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Apr 2, 2021 at 10:15pm
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Edited: April 2, 2021 at 10:17pm
Re: Monty's : Form of the Week: Lai
by Tinker Author IconMail Icon
Hi Monty, Yes the world is changing and though some of it is amazing, the seeming loss of humanity is startling. Nice poem.

(Note, for the Lai there should only be 2 rhymes aabaabaab, you created a poem with 4 rhymes aabccbddb. It's really not important, the Form inspired this thoughtful piece. The content is the more important than the frame.)

~~Tink
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Form of the Week: Lai · 04-01-21 12:28am
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Re: Form of the Week: Lai · 04-01-21 12:34am
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Re: Toni's : Form of the Week: Lai · 04-02-21 10:09pm
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Re: Form of the Week: Lai · 04-01-21 10:36am
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Re: Re: Form of the Week: Lai · 04-01-21 12:05pm
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Re: Re: Re: Form of the Week: Lai · 04-02-21 8:39am
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*Star* Re: Monty's : Form of the Week: Lai · 04-02-21 10:15pm
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Re: Re: Monty's : Form of the Week: Lai · 04-03-21 4:28pm
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Re: Tink's Form of the Week: Lai · 04-02-21 10:07pm
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Re: Re: Tink's Form of the Week: Lai · 04-02-21 10:10pm
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Re: Form of the Week: Lai · 04-05-21 6:56pm
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Re: Re: Form of the Week: Lai · 04-05-21 8:13pm
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Re: Re: Re: Form of the Week: Lai · 04-06-21 11:25am
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