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DISCUSSION: Tips for Writing Meaningful Poetry


DISCUSSION: Tips for Writing Meaningful Poetry


I am the only one who can write my poems.” ~ Joe Bunting



Your poem should be about something that matters to you. It doesn’t have to be from your real-life experience, but it needs to express something you feel strongly about. Of course, your poem doesn't have to be only serious or dramatic. It might be light-hearted or whimsical or cheerful, too.

Don’t try to copy another poet’s style. Your poem should be written in your own voice so that your personality gleams through. Part of what makes poems meaningful is that they are written from the point-of-view of each particular poet.

Use your own emotions and experiences for inspiration. Not all poetry is autobiographical, but a poem should reflect the heart and soul of the poetry writer.

Instead of using vague or general ideas, use imagery to “show” the reader what you mean.

Choose interesting words, including figurative language, to express your ideas. However, don’t force unnatural or disingenuous wording into your poem.


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In these poems, each poet’s voice comes shining through.



HIGH FLIGHT
   by John Gillespie Magee, Jr.

Oh! I have slipped the surly bonds of Earth
And danced the skies on laughter-silvered wings,
Sunward I've climbed, and joined the tumbling mirth
Of sun-split clouds - and done a hundred things
You have not dreamed of - wheeled and soared and swung
High in the sunlit silence. Hov'ring there,
I've chased the shouting wind along, and flung
My eager craft through footless halls of air.
Up, up the long, delirious burning blue
I've topped the wind-swept heights with easy grace
Where never lark, or even eagle flew.
And, while silent, lifting mind I've trod
The high untrespassed sanctity of space,
Put out my hand, and touched the face of God.


(source: https://nationalpoetryday.co.uk/poem/high-flight/)



Nest
   by Jeffrey Harrison

It wasn't until we got the Christmas tree
into the house and up on the stand
that our daughter discovered a small bird's nest
tucked among its needled branches.

Amazing, that the nest had made it
all the way from Nova Scotia on a truck
mashed together with hundreds of other trees
without being dislodged or crushed.

And now it made the tree feel wilder,
a balsam fir growing in our living room,
as though at any moment a bird might flutter
through the house and return to the nest.

And yet, because we'd brought the tree indoors,
we'd turned the nest into the first ornament.
So we wound the tree with strings of lights,
draped it with strands of red beads,

and added the other ornaments, then dropped
two small brass bells into the nest, like eggs
containing music, and hung a painted goldfinch
from the branch above, as if to keep them warm.


(source: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/55885/nest-56d237e2d619c)



Abandoned Farmhouse
   by Ted Kooser

He was a big man, says the size of his shoes
on a pile of broken dishes by the house;
a tall man too, says the length of the bed
in an upstairs room; and a good, God-fearing man,
says the Bible with a broken back
on the floor below the window, dusty with sun;
but not a man for farming, say the fields
cluttered with boulders and the leaky barn.

A woman lived with him, says the bedroom wall
papered with lilacs and the kitchen shelves
covered with oilcloth, and they had a child,
says the sandbox made from a tractor tire.
Money was scarce, say the jars of plum preserves
and canned tomatoes sealed in the cellar hole.
And the winters cold, say the rags in the window frames.
It was lonely here, says the narrow country road.

Something went wrong, says the empty house
in the weed-choked yard. Stones in the fields
say he was not a farmer; the still-sealed jars
in the cellar say she left in a nervous haste.
And the child? Its toys are strewn in the yard
like branches after a storm—a rubber cow,
a rusty tractor with a broken plow,
a doll in overalls. Something went wrong, they say.


(source: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/52935/abandoned-farmhouse)


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If you’d like, share a poem you’ve written that communicates to readers
the strong feelings you have for the subject of that poem.

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