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Oct 15, 2020 at 10:06pm
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Re: Form of the week: San San


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In our yard is a tree called Slim.
When planted, he was young and frail.
Time has passed; now Slim is strong.
We bought him one day on a whim
when seedling trees were all on sale.
The skimpy tree’s chances were low.
Our expectations were so wrong,
for a small sapling’s hell-bent to grow.



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form: San San (an image repeated 3 times, varying wording / rhyme scheme of a b c a b d c d)

(10.15.20)
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