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Sep 24, 2020 at 11:03pm
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Re: Form of the week: Onda Mel

my Onda Mel ...


Playing in the Rain

ushered into a joyful dance
storm clouds above
they take hold of
me whirling twirling just by chance
resounding thunder beats its drum
inside my vein
against my brain
arms flung wide – let the wild rain come




~ ~ ~
form: Onda Mel (8 lines, syllables 8-4-4-8-8-4-4-8, rhyme abbacddc)
prompt: water

(09.24.20)
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