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Sep 19, 2020 at 4:03am
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Love trichan
by JCosmos Author IconMail Icon
Love Trichan

I met her on that Date
when I finally met my Fate
and she became my Mate

she walked out of my Dream
out of the daily Daydream
her love like a Moonbeam

she came to my Life
came to my Real-life
and became my Wife

any suggestions places to review re-learn the meter I may not ahve gotten it right
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Love trichan · 09-19-20 4:03am
by JCosmos Author IconMail Icon
Re: Jake's Love trichan · 09-19-20 2:25pm
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Re: Re: Jake's Love trichan · 09-23-20 11:44pm
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